Wednesday, January 16, 2013

Triple Double by Careem McLeod






Characters

Max Strong- Main character super hero/ star athlete/ boyfriend

Hillary Flowers- girlfriend

Anna- Hillarys best friend

Ty- Max’s bedtfriend

Max is a 5'10" basket ball star. He has short curly hair, and he is brownskin and he loves fashion art and basketball. Hillary is 5'1 and she is a very talented dancer with jet black shoulder length hair, and juicy pink lips.

It is a week before the championship basketball game. Max is walking with his friend Shabar (the only other person who knows that he’s a hero) to go on a double date with his beautiful girlfriend Hillary and her bestfriend Anna. “Are you ready for your first date with anna?” says Max. Ty replies frantically “I was born ready bro!, but hows you and hilly? Shes been pretty upset with you lately bruh bruh.” Max sigh Im trynna hang in there bro, This hero stuff is really starting to interfere with what we have, im starting to think the only way I can fix this is by telling her the truth!” Max looks at Ty and puts his hand on his shoulder and says “You gotta help me bro”. Ty says, ”Max, if you tell her it might only make matters worse, you know how she feels about heros”. Max replies “Yea you’re right, I just hope today goes great, its me and hillarys 14 month anniversary and I promised her ill make it up to her” Max gets a call Max picks up.. Its his captain and the captain says he has to do a mission asap. Max is upset but he has no choice but to do his mission. Max Ty! You have to cover for me bro! Ty ughh, bro hillarys not gonna keep believing these stories. Max im gonna be there just tell her im running late! Thanks you’re the best! Max runs to go and complete his mission .

Max running to the park and sees Hillary crying

Hillary, baby im sooo sorry!! I really tried to be here on time. Hillary sniffles in disappointment. “You know I would’ve been here if I could’ve! C’mon Honey butt please don’t be mad at me!” Max exclaimed. " Max strong im not even mad, at you, im just so dissappointed and ready to give up on you." " Hillary, pleaaase dont act like that! you know i really would've been here if i could, you mean the world to me and i love you more than i do myself! can you please forgive me" Hillary smirks a little and says "Alright fine max! I'll forgive you but this is the last straw, and i mean it this time. Max jumps in joy "Thank you baby i promise i will make it up to you next week after the championship game, and i won"t mess it up." Max kisses her soft pink lips and they walk out the park holding hands.

One week later..

Max is in the locker room getting ready for practice as his captain calls him. "Hello", "Im sorry for calling you on such short notice, but we just heard that the bandits are gonna start a riot at 7:00 on the dot downtown". "Captain, I really can't make it!!, Today is my championship game and i have to be somewhere after!!" Max yelled "Max, Your city is depending on you being there, If want to remain a part of the division you have to be there" "Fine" Max says, Then he Hangs up the phone, and punches a locker out of anger. Max is sitting on the bench thinking to himself of a plan to play the championship game, save the city, and make it in time for his date with hillary, When suddenly it hits him! Max devises a plan. Max's game started at 6:00, The bandits were gonna start the riot at 7:00 and he had to meet Hillary by 8, So his plan was to play the game and score as much points as he could by 6:45, then he wold fake an injury so he couldnt play anymore, after thatt he would rush downtown to defeat the bandits and make it back in time for his date.

It is now time for the championship game practice. Max goes into the hardwood floor gym to run drills before the game. While he is practicing he tells Ty his plan, "Max, we need you, your our star player. You can't leave early" Ty says. "This is something i need to do bro, Don't worry. All you have to do is keep the lane free and pass me the ball when ever im open, and when im done, i need you to play as if your idol Michael jordan is watching you." "Gotcha bro".

The game finally started, Ty gets the ball and see's Max open at the 3 point line, he passes it and max scores, nothing but net. Max continued to score continuously, the croud was chanting his name and he looks at the time it was 6:40. It was the middle of the 3rd quarter and max already had 57 points, that was the best game he ever played so far. Max realizes that he has to make it downtown so he steals the ball from the opposing team and runs for a fast break and he pretends to twist his ankle. A couple of bench warmers take Max to the back to ice his ankle. Max's team was in the lead, the score was 91 to 62. Max felt he set a big enough lead so he hurries downtown to fight he villians.

It is now 7:13 and max arrives downtown and the bandits already got a start to the riot. It was three of them. One was about 6'0, another was 5'10 and the last on was 5'3 and really chubby. They were breaking into stores, breaking into cash registers, setting garbage cans on fire, and disturbing the peace. Max runs after the Chubby one first and tackles him and ties him up using one of his gadgets, while he's doing that The other two villians attack him. Max breaks free and uses all his strength two tie up the last two bandits. Max is pretty banged up so he Turns in the villians and heads home to clean up for his date with hillary. While he's home Ty calls him to tell him the good news, They won the championship game. the score was 127 to 89, but everybody was wondering where Max was.

It is now 8:10 and Max arrives to meet Hillary at the movie theatre for their date. Max has a busted lip and a bruise on his head but hillary was still exstatic to see him. She asks him what happens and he decides to tell her the truth. He tells her everything about why he was late all of the times and why he was always acting suspicious. Max expects Hillary to be mad at him but instead she Thinks its sweet that Max did all that to keep her in his life even though she hates super heros. Max tells hillary the good news that he quit his super hero job and they can be together peacefully and live happily ever after.

THE END.

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